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The sun had finally arose as it raced into the room of the 16 year old Danni Gray  dressed in her pink pajamas and socks she sat up in her bed. She pushed aside her long brown hair as she yawned, she then she then stared with her brown eyes outside her window and saw the blazing sun “What a beautiful day!” she thought.

She then heard a knock at her door “Come in!” she yelled.

Her brother Larry entered the room dressed in his blue T-shirt, sweatpants, and appeared to be holding something behind his back. Larry was just a year older than Danni had blazing red hair and bright green eyes. “Little  sis I need a favor I don’t feel like walking Taco today could you?” Larry asked.

“No it’s your turn today so you do it!” she yelled at him as she pulled the covers over her leaving her pink socked feet exposed.

“Aw come on sis please.” Larry said moving closer to her feet.

“NO!” she yelled from underneath the covers.

“Alright then looks like I’m going to have to make you!” Larry said as he sat on her bed and used his forearm to trap her ankles.

He than begin to tickle Danni’s socked feet starting at the sole, a mixture of snickers and giggles could be heard from coming beneath the covers. “Nohehe wahehey Larry ticklinhegs not going to work this tiheheheheme.” Danni giggled.

“At least not with socks on it’s not.” Larry added as he took over his sisters pink socks exposing her size 7 feet he then watched as her little purple-painted toes wiggled to adjusted to the cool air.

“Larry don’t you darHEHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH!!!  Danni was cut off as she felt her brother fingers begin scribbling over her bare feet.

“Aww what’s wrong does my little sister have ticklish little feet?” Larry teased.

YEHAHAHAHAS IAHAHAHAHDO PLEASAHAHAHAHHAE STAPAHAHAHAHA!!! Danni laughed.

Danni felt the tickling suddenly stop as the covers were pulled off her. She quickly tried to crawl under her was stopped at her feet as Larry quickly grabbed them leaving Danni trapped under her bed. Larry then continued were he left once again scribbling his fingers over her soles once again sending Danni into laughter. Then tickling stopped once again but only for a few seconds as she then felt something soft swipe across her feet sending her into hysterical laughter. Larry had started to use a feather that had kept in his pocket.

He slid it inbetween her purple toes and her laughter rose another notch. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOHAHAMOHAHAHREHAHAH!!!” Danni laughed as she began to pound the floor.

This went on for another 5 minutes than it suddenly stopped she felt a pair of hands grab her ankles and pull her out from under the bed. Once she recovered and had let out the rest of giggles she saw Larry being scolded by there mother Nancy. Dressed in her block top and pants, she had brown hair and eyes like Danni she than told Larry to leave and go walk Taco. “You okay honey?” She asked Danni.

“Yes I’m fine I just wish Larry wouldn’t tickle me so much.” Danni replied standing up.
“My brother used to do me the same way.” Nancy said as she poked her daughters side.

“Mom don’t do that!” Danni said recoiling in giggles.
This are going to be stories about a ticklish teenage girl named Danni Gray. She's going to truly have some adventures and each one someone going to get tickled!!! I pulled this off one of my interactives from my writing.com account.
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TheRealMrGrumpy Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Dude, I loved this story.
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NMKamikaze Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
I loved this story when it was on writing.com. I hope you do decide to finish it here
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Sericatus Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
Any chance of the rest of this story finding its way to DA? I was heartbroken when it disappeared from Writing.com.
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Bigman70 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
Possbily, I've been thinking about bringing it again, but Im nt sure, where Im either working, with friends, or tickle RPing I normally dont have alot of time :/ so its still a maybe.
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devil197 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
does this story still exist? cuz i couldnt find it...
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EmoWolfie Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
I love this cute lil' short story! You gonna make anymore?
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Bigman70 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
Maybe. I'm still thinking about it.
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EmoWolfie Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
You totally should!

If you want any ideas, I might have a few up my sleeve. Just a thought.
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Bigman70 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009
K send me a note with a few of ur ideas.
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gaarasgirl999 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008  Student Writer
Danni, Larry and Nancy. You wouldnt happen to have a story on Writing.com would you? Same scene, same charcters.
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